Post by TrekkiesUnite118 on Oct 11, 2009 21:33:29 GMT -5
Tell me what you guys think.
Episode 3
*We find Edward being charged and arrested in the club, Suki and Joey come running over*
Suki: “Sorry officer, it gets excited easily, he didn’t mean it.”
Joanna: “Is there anything that can be done to keep him from being arrested? After all he was just a bit overexcited with the club and all.”
Officer: “Well, I guess no harm done; I can see why he would be so excited after all.”
Zane: “WHAT! This club is government property! He has broken and entered! He SHOULD be punished!”
Suki: “But sir, everyone was in, that guy broomop is the one who broke in, everyone else just followed afterwards. Don’t you think it’s a bit unreasonable to arrest him for something so minor?”
Zane: “No, my being unreasonable would be demanding your arrest too for defying me!”
Suki and Joanna: “WHAT?!”
Zane: “That reminds me, I am unreasonable! Arrest all three of them officer!”
Officer: “Sorry, but I have to obey what he says, as he’s a government official, he can press charges for crimes that concern this club.”
*Lyra Neils enters from behind Zane*
Lyra: “Excellent work sir, you are quite brilliant in you reasoning.”
Suki: “What? There’s got to be some sort of abuse of power here!”
Lyra: “HOW DARE YOU! He could have charged you with something far worse; you’ve been let off easy on this!”
Zane: “That will be enough Lyra.”
Lyra: “Yes sir.”
Zane: “Well I would love to stay and chat, but I must be off, I have a meeting with the president and I don’t want to be late!”
*They leave and the scene goes black*
*We find our heroes in a jail cell, (We will use the Parum Waiting area for this scene, so there will be a shop lady, we can say she was busted for selling drugs or something)*
Suki: “You just had to get all excited, didn’t you Edward?”
Edward: “Oh shut up! You should be happy! Now you don’t have to play Virtua Fighter with me!”
Suki: “This is true…”
Joanna: “I wouldn’t be so upset with him Suki, after all this is quite an exciting day so far!”
Suki: “Being arrested isn’t really my idea of exciting.”
Joanna: “Ok, but what about getting to see the 5th floor of the colony! That had to be fun!”
Edward: “I expected so much more; instead we just have a counter and some stairs…”
Suki: “Yeah, that wasn’t that great either…”
Joanna: “Ok, then what about that lady over there, I’m sure she has an interesting story!”
Cast Lady: “PILLS (PEELS) HERE!”
*All 3 stare confused*
*Lubelle and Bitzor enter*
Bitzor: “-so I was telling this guy ‘make one more crack about my size, and you’ll regret it’ and he said- what do we have here?”
Lubelle: “Edward, what are you doing here?”
Edward: “Marci! I forgot you were a GUARDIAN! Perhaps you can get us out of here!”
Lubelle: “That’s possible, but it depends on what you did.”
Edward: “Well…”
Suki: “Oh Marci it’s awful! That Senator Zane charged us with breaking into the club when we didn’t even do anything, some hacker broke in and everyone being curious as to what was in there entered. We were just at the wrong place at the wrong time!”
Lubelle: “Well, that club is government property…”
Bitzor: “Oh come on Lubelle, you know just as well as I do that club is a waste of resources! You were just saying the other day that they should really just sell it back to the public, we have no need for a club.”
Lubelle: “I know Kylo, but Zane isn’t overstepping his bounds here. So we can’t really get them out of here.”
Bitzor: “True, but we could look into some sort of arrangement. Lessen the charges. Right now they are looking at jail time if Zane pulls the strings of the court as he usually does.”
Lubelle: “I know… Oh Edward, why did you have to get yourselves in so much trouble! What would your parents say about this?”
Edward: “I wasn’t trying to get myself into trouble! Really, that Zane is just a jerk.”
Bitzor: “He does have a point, Zane is a bastard. And his assistant is nothing but a Windowgut.”
Joey: “What’s a Window Gut?”
Bitzor: “It’s when you have your head so far up your own, or in her case Zane’s, ass that you need a window in the gut to see out.”
Lubelle: “KYLO BITZER! DO NOT TEACH THEM SUCH CRUDE AMF LANGAUGE!”
Joey: *giggling* “Oh it’s alright ma’am, I found it quite funny.”
Lubelle: “Regardless he shouldn’t be talking that way around children…”
Edward: “Marci, we’re not 5 anymore you know…”
Lubelle: “I know that, but to me you 2 will always be the little kids who grew up playing in our residential block.”
Suki: “I rather regret now not joining the GUARDIANS when you approached us about it years ago. It would certainly help us out now…”
Bitzor: “THAT’S IT! Come on Lubelle; let’s go talk to the president!”
*The two exit*
*A few minutes pass…*
[I am stumped as to what to put here, you guys figure something out please?}
*Bitzor and Lubelle come back*
Lubelle: “Ok guys, we’ve worked something out, it wasn’t easy mind you, but you can all leave free without any charges being pressed against you.”
Edward: “WOW! How did you pull that off? Did you remove a piece of clothing or something?”
Lubelle: “I’m ignoring that.”
Bitzor: “How do you guys put up with him?”
Suki: “Well after a while you learn to just tune him out…”
Edward: “Anyways, let’s go, there’s a copy of Virtua Fighter with my name on it back home!”
*They go to leave but Bitzor stops them*
Bitzor: “Hold up you guys, there are conditions here.”
Joey: “Conditions?”
Lubelle: “Yeah, we could only get you out if you agreed to join the Guardians Reserve…”
Edward: “WHAT?!”
Suki: “Oh come on Ed, what would you rather do, sit in jail and rot, or be on reserves in case a crisis, a highly unlikely crisis, arises but still have a normal life outside of jail?”
Edward: “I’ll need time to think on this…”
Lubelle: “Too late, I already signed you three up.”
Edward: “Damn.”
Bitzor: “Oh don’t worry, we’ve had peace for over 100 years now, odds are you’ll never be needed.”
*End of Episode 3*
Episode 3
*We find Edward being charged and arrested in the club, Suki and Joey come running over*
Suki: “Sorry officer, it gets excited easily, he didn’t mean it.”
Joanna: “Is there anything that can be done to keep him from being arrested? After all he was just a bit overexcited with the club and all.”
Officer: “Well, I guess no harm done; I can see why he would be so excited after all.”
Zane: “WHAT! This club is government property! He has broken and entered! He SHOULD be punished!”
Suki: “But sir, everyone was in, that guy broomop is the one who broke in, everyone else just followed afterwards. Don’t you think it’s a bit unreasonable to arrest him for something so minor?”
Zane: “No, my being unreasonable would be demanding your arrest too for defying me!”
Suki and Joanna: “WHAT?!”
Zane: “That reminds me, I am unreasonable! Arrest all three of them officer!”
Officer: “Sorry, but I have to obey what he says, as he’s a government official, he can press charges for crimes that concern this club.”
*Lyra Neils enters from behind Zane*
Lyra: “Excellent work sir, you are quite brilliant in you reasoning.”
Suki: “What? There’s got to be some sort of abuse of power here!”
Lyra: “HOW DARE YOU! He could have charged you with something far worse; you’ve been let off easy on this!”
Zane: “That will be enough Lyra.”
Lyra: “Yes sir.”
Zane: “Well I would love to stay and chat, but I must be off, I have a meeting with the president and I don’t want to be late!”
*They leave and the scene goes black*
*We find our heroes in a jail cell, (We will use the Parum Waiting area for this scene, so there will be a shop lady, we can say she was busted for selling drugs or something)*
Suki: “You just had to get all excited, didn’t you Edward?”
Edward: “Oh shut up! You should be happy! Now you don’t have to play Virtua Fighter with me!”
Suki: “This is true…”
Joanna: “I wouldn’t be so upset with him Suki, after all this is quite an exciting day so far!”
Suki: “Being arrested isn’t really my idea of exciting.”
Joanna: “Ok, but what about getting to see the 5th floor of the colony! That had to be fun!”
Edward: “I expected so much more; instead we just have a counter and some stairs…”
Suki: “Yeah, that wasn’t that great either…”
Joanna: “Ok, then what about that lady over there, I’m sure she has an interesting story!”
Cast Lady: “PILLS (PEELS) HERE!”
*All 3 stare confused*
*Lubelle and Bitzor enter*
Bitzor: “-so I was telling this guy ‘make one more crack about my size, and you’ll regret it’ and he said- what do we have here?”
Lubelle: “Edward, what are you doing here?”
Edward: “Marci! I forgot you were a GUARDIAN! Perhaps you can get us out of here!”
Lubelle: “That’s possible, but it depends on what you did.”
Edward: “Well…”
Suki: “Oh Marci it’s awful! That Senator Zane charged us with breaking into the club when we didn’t even do anything, some hacker broke in and everyone being curious as to what was in there entered. We were just at the wrong place at the wrong time!”
Lubelle: “Well, that club is government property…”
Bitzor: “Oh come on Lubelle, you know just as well as I do that club is a waste of resources! You were just saying the other day that they should really just sell it back to the public, we have no need for a club.”
Lubelle: “I know Kylo, but Zane isn’t overstepping his bounds here. So we can’t really get them out of here.”
Bitzor: “True, but we could look into some sort of arrangement. Lessen the charges. Right now they are looking at jail time if Zane pulls the strings of the court as he usually does.”
Lubelle: “I know… Oh Edward, why did you have to get yourselves in so much trouble! What would your parents say about this?”
Edward: “I wasn’t trying to get myself into trouble! Really, that Zane is just a jerk.”
Bitzor: “He does have a point, Zane is a bastard. And his assistant is nothing but a Windowgut.”
Joey: “What’s a Window Gut?”
Bitzor: “It’s when you have your head so far up your own, or in her case Zane’s, ass that you need a window in the gut to see out.”
Lubelle: “KYLO BITZER! DO NOT TEACH THEM SUCH CRUDE AMF LANGAUGE!”
Joey: *giggling* “Oh it’s alright ma’am, I found it quite funny.”
Lubelle: “Regardless he shouldn’t be talking that way around children…”
Edward: “Marci, we’re not 5 anymore you know…”
Lubelle: “I know that, but to me you 2 will always be the little kids who grew up playing in our residential block.”
Suki: “I rather regret now not joining the GUARDIANS when you approached us about it years ago. It would certainly help us out now…”
Bitzor: “THAT’S IT! Come on Lubelle; let’s go talk to the president!”
*The two exit*
*A few minutes pass…*
[I am stumped as to what to put here, you guys figure something out please?}
*Bitzor and Lubelle come back*
Lubelle: “Ok guys, we’ve worked something out, it wasn’t easy mind you, but you can all leave free without any charges being pressed against you.”
Edward: “WOW! How did you pull that off? Did you remove a piece of clothing or something?”
Lubelle: “I’m ignoring that.”
Bitzor: “How do you guys put up with him?”
Suki: “Well after a while you learn to just tune him out…”
Edward: “Anyways, let’s go, there’s a copy of Virtua Fighter with my name on it back home!”
*They go to leave but Bitzor stops them*
Bitzor: “Hold up you guys, there are conditions here.”
Joey: “Conditions?”
Lubelle: “Yeah, we could only get you out if you agreed to join the Guardians Reserve…”
Edward: “WHAT?!”
Suki: “Oh come on Ed, what would you rather do, sit in jail and rot, or be on reserves in case a crisis, a highly unlikely crisis, arises but still have a normal life outside of jail?”
Edward: “I’ll need time to think on this…”
Lubelle: “Too late, I already signed you three up.”
Edward: “Damn.”
Bitzor: “Oh don’t worry, we’ve had peace for over 100 years now, odds are you’ll never be needed.”
*End of Episode 3*