Idea for a short

[TrekkiesUnite118]

Here's an idea I had for a short we could do.

*We start with Edward and Bowen on the first floor of the Colony*

Bowen: "Greetings fellow citizens of Gurhal! Today we have a very important message to tell you."

Edward: "Yes, very VERY important...kinda"

Bowen: "Due to the high number of lolis, shotas, and furries that inhabit Gurhal, we feel we must talk about a serious threat that exists to all of them. And that threat is sexual predators. To help talk about this issue is none other than Sonic the Hedgehog, and Miles Tails Prower."

*We pan to a shot of Sonic*

Sonic: "Kids, there's nothing more cool than getting hugs from someone you like..."

*Pan to a shot of Tails and one of our shorter cast members hugging*

Tails: "This is nice..."

*back to Sonic*

Sonic: "But if someone tries to touch you in a place or way that makes you feel uncomfortable, that's NO good!"

*We pan back to Tails who now has a very large rappy standing behind him doing the nanoblast animation.*

Tails: "HELP! I'M BEING TOUCHED IN A PLACE OR WAY THAT MAKES ME FEEL UNCOMFORTABLE!"

*back to Sonic*

Sonic: "It's your body! No one has the right to touch if you don't want them to!"

*Back to Tails*

Tails: "It's My body! You don't have the right to touch it if I don't want you to!"

Rappy: "That just makes it more exciting!"

*Back to Sonic*

Sonic: "So what do you do? First you say NO!"

*Back to Tails*

Tails: "NOOOOOOOOO!!"

Rappy: "Oh I love it when they try to fight back..."

*Back to Sonic*

Sonic: "Then you get out of there!"

*Back to Tails*

Tails: *running away* "GET OUT OF THERE!"

Rappy: "Aw, he got away..."

*Back to Sonic*

Sonic: "And don't forget to tell an adult that you trust!"

*Back to Tails*

Tails: *Running around* "I NEED AN ADULT! I NEED AN ADULT!"

*We then come back to Bowen and Edward*

Bowen: "And there you have it!"

Edward: "Hopefully after that extremely hilarious illustration you can now all see the graveness of this very serious issue, and hope you now all know what to do if you or a loli near you is affected by this!"

Bowen: "And with that we conclude this Public Service Announcement!"

*Enter Wester in a Rappy Suit*

Wester: "Ok, I'm here, how long do I have to be in this stupid suit."

Bowen: "What are you talking about? We just finished. You were here already"

Wester: "No I wasn't, I've been trying to find the least ridiculous Rappy suit for the last hour."

*The Screen starts to fade out*

Edward: "Uh oh..."

Tails: "I feel dirty..."

End of Short 1

[TrekkiesUnite118]

The only problem with this is it requires us to ask Edward to allow us to film the Sonic NPC skins.

[Akirav2]

couple suggestions, should probably change the word "that" in this sentence
Sonic: "Kids, there's nothing more cool that getting hugs from someone you like..."

to the word "than" to make it read like this
Sonic: "Kids, there's nothing more cool than getting hugs from someone you like..."

or alter the sentence to make it read like this
Sonic: "Kids, there's nothing more awesome than getting a hug from someone you like..."

[TrekkiesUnite118]

Oh oops, that was a typo.